Monday, November 15, 2010

Monday November 15, 2010 Poetry Potluck

Challenge is "moods, feelings and emotions."

Moods, feelings and emotions,
What pesky little things,
Sometimes out of control,
On their own,
Turn life to chaos.

They want to be stars
In their own right,
Center stage,
Return obsessively,
Shoot the stars,
Or dive deep,

Life in the slow lane
Is not for them.
They will show up,
Upset the apple cart,
And begone again in a wink.

10 comments:

  1. yes, i agree sometimes that they go on berserk and brought chao.. lovely piece!

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  2. they want to be stars...

    love the line,
    your have remarkable imaginations.
    Keep it up.
    Happy Monday.
    Thanks for linking up with potluck.

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  3. here there and everywhere...they go...

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  4. Not easy to tame, are they? I don't get the potluck till Monday either. I think that's because of the time difference. I'm in Reno and it's posted by Kavita who I think is in India.
    I love the image you have of Taos. Thanks so much for your comments on my poem.
    Victoria

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  5. Dear Annell
    I enjoyed it.. you have create a beautiful story in your verse... I liked the picture too.
    Thanks for sharing..
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  6. true words for us all to read... good read!

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  7. 'They will show up,
    Upset the apple cart,
    And begone again in a wink.'

    Annell this is so good. Worth remembering isn't it, that the upset apple cart seems to hang around much longer than the wink!

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  8. thanks for linking up with potluck.

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/

    award/treats for you. smiles.

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