Saturday, December 18, 2010

Saturday December 17, 2010 Writer's Island & the Poetry Bus


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#34 Triumph

TRIUMPH
This shinny star
I wear upon my dress
Is not a token
Of what I call success.

But instead a beacon,
Just to light the way,
A little encouragement,
A triumph for today.

11 comments:

  1. smiles. so nice you let it shine for all to see...

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  2. I like this ... you could also use it as a ticket to ride this week on Weaver's Poetry Bus! The prompt is 'Star.'

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  3. A bit of personal triumph each day is a good way to nurture the Artistic soul. Good one,

    Elizabeth

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  4. your poetry is once again simply wonderful

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  5. Short but very sweet message! I like!

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  6. Loved it. One bit of life at a time, small but important triumphs!

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  7. Today's triumphs are of utmost importance. This is very nice, dear, but one small thing: you must change the spelling of "shinny" to its correct "shiny"!

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  8. Editors are so useful to find, aspecially when they are shiny too! LOL

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  9. And one would be Especially useful to me! LOL

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  10. This one is particularly meaningful to me, having just suffered a fright and looked death in the face I am learning to live one day at a time - shall think of wearing a star after reading this.

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