Wednesday, August 27, 2014

August 27, 2014/ Poets United, Midweek Motif/ An Evening Out


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Artist: Vincent van Gogh. Completion Date: 1888. Place of Creation: Arles, Bouches-du-Rhône, France



An Evening Out
Voices raised in Evensong
Day is done
Twilight near
Angels play hide and seek
Among the clouds of gold

Fly low
Descend
Play among the lesser folk
Kiss babies 
Bless the sick and the old
Tuck in the children
Read a story book
Say good night

Evening out
A barfly flutters in the night
Drawn to the light
The tavern old
A tired display
Have a drink
Celebrate the day
Be my baby for just 
One Starry Night

August 27, 2014














12 comments:

  1. beautifully descriptive ending in a sad note...

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  2. Wow, how precious the gold, the painting, the memory, the tone of gentle longing in a place to remember. This brought a tear.

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  3. "Be my baby for just one starry night...." pings at the heart, my friend. I do love that starry night and the beautiful painting. Until I read the inscription I thought it might be one of yours! I love Vincent's night sky.

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  4. There is magic in this night out it starts with Van Gogh and ends with sweet words.

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  5. may the angels swing low
    and shower you with blessings annell...smiles.

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  6. Have a drink
    Celebrate the day
    Be my baby for just
    One Starry Night

    For just one starry night when things are really moving! That'll be fun! Great take annell!

    Hank

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  7. I like the second stanza the best.

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  8. Oh your night life is the stuff of fairy tales and all. loved the poem!

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  9. How beautifully you have taken us into the stars and Vincent's night...I hope that final wish came true... X

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  10. A barfly flutters in the night

    So beautiful!!

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  11. Fly low
    Descend
    Play among the lesser folk
    Kiss babies
    Bless the sick and the old

    Simple, yet so touching and moving... Beautiful

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