Sunday, June 21, 2015

Sunday Whirligig/Broken Dreams -- Poets United/ Poet's Pantry

Broken Dreams

a woman wanders...

     ... through her life

     ... negotiating customs and traditions

     ...examines the architecture 

     ... inspects the underlying structure

     ...so much forgotten

     ...she stands separate from the past

     ... remembers little

      ...her life is here

      ...in this moment 

      ...in this city-of-now

     ... holds love sacred

     ...with tremulous hands

      ...she opens the letter

     ... that holds her future

June 20, 2015



16 comments:

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Such emotion.. such depth! I m so touched by this poem! Great write!

Lots of love,
Sanaa

X said...

Interesting. Makes me wonder about the nature of the letter. So many notices in life from the tax bill to medical. I hope it was not bad news.

Sumana Roy said...

the last two lines bring us back to the title...so poignant...

Nonnie said...

oh, my heart stops, waiting for the letter's contents!

Anonymous said...

Thank you, my friend. Having recently walked through just such a moment, I'm grateful to know that I am not alone,

Elizabeth

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Yes, I held my breath, wondering at the contents of the letter. I really like the "city-of-now".

brudberg said...

I think there are moments when everything changes.. those turning points.. those sliding doors.

Donna@LivingFromHappiness said...

I have been examining the architecture and inspecting the underlying structures myself lately....I love the present moment of these words...the hope in the letter.

Mary said...

I like how you have incorporated past, present, and future into this poem. The ending is suspenseful. I wonder what the letter holds!

Anonymous said...

Nicely done! Full of emotion and tension.

Jae Rose said...

I hope that letter holds a bright future...i love how you have composed this...refined to essential thoughts..

annell4 said...

Thank you so much for reposting my poem!

Gen Giggles said...

So open and suspenseful.

Anonymous said...

So much truth in this--I like the list format.

Blogoratti said...

A wonderful piece filled with hope for the future.

Shilpa said...

Heart touching post
I am sharing it
This post made my day
Thank you

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