tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post1143830808760787404..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: Poets United/A Piece of Yarn--Imaginary Gardens with Real Toadsannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-22277518028240082152015-06-12T20:15:23.530-06:002015-06-12T20:15:23.530-06:00Memories are easy to pick up and hard to lay back ...Memories are easy to pick up and hard to lay back down.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-91489535534887699942015-06-12T12:52:28.731-06:002015-06-12T12:52:28.731-06:00Love the bread crumb reference.Love the bread crumb reference.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-75581995481408516572015-06-11T11:07:16.234-06:002015-06-11T11:07:16.234-06:00Those flycatchers... we learn a lot from them, by ...Those flycatchers... we learn a lot from them, by watching and following their patterns of flight and alight.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-31448585169035990562015-06-10T21:24:21.769-06:002015-06-10T21:24:21.769-06:00This deserves a reread - several. well done.This deserves a reread - several. well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-51789855722421333722015-06-10T19:10:43.717-06:002015-06-10T19:10:43.717-06:00Follow the bread crumbs home...that's a strong...Follow the bread crumbs home...that's a strong line that wraps up the mood of the poem so well. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-2703788436563525312015-06-10T15:28:27.433-06:002015-06-10T15:28:27.433-06:00"i don't remember growing older whe..."i don't remember growing older when did you" ~ Such beautiful depiction of human life...we just move along with time.. summer/fall/winter/spring come back again and again...<br />Loved the depth of the poem. A beautiful piece of work. :) <br />Purba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-90939061722912079462015-06-10T13:18:41.188-06:002015-06-10T13:18:41.188-06:00This is so beautiful and very sad, especially the ...This is so beautiful and very sad, especially the reference to the little boy. I am sure your grief is very much your companion at times. My heart is with you. You've written something exquisite here.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-17681411549188974922015-06-10T11:17:02.237-06:002015-06-10T11:17:02.237-06:00Back from Mid Week for another wonderful read....I...Back from Mid Week for another wonderful read....I so resonate with this poem - the passage of time - how quickly the little boy becomes a man.........."sunrise, sunset, swiftly fly the years". That's for sure. Beautifully done, my friend. One of your best.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-58689123303585962962015-06-10T10:15:53.489-06:002015-06-10T10:15:53.489-06:00Yes, sunrise/sunset - the years march on; and it s...Yes, sunrise/sunset - the years march on; and it seems they march faster as time moves on. And indeed we see children getting older...but we are sometimes amazed at our own aging until we look in the mirror. I was moved by the tears &following the breadcrumbs home.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-57070588851296153872015-06-10T09:59:26.068-06:002015-06-10T09:59:26.068-06:00Love the idea of piece of yarn, to follow, reminde...Love the idea of piece of yarn, to follow, reminded me a "Fiddler on the roof", song "Sunset/sunrise"....enjoyed very much!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-6070341101329279862015-06-10T08:49:54.013-06:002015-06-10T08:49:54.013-06:00Still amazing on second reading!Still amazing on second reading!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-67420096579662600522015-06-10T08:14:08.415-06:002015-06-10T08:14:08.415-06:00This poem seems to encompass a whole life!This poem seems to encompass a whole life!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-52703737411536064982015-06-10T07:57:53.723-06:002015-06-10T07:57:53.723-06:00sunrise and sunset, both the images work so brilli...sunrise and sunset, both the images work so brilliantly to weave this yarn of joy, sorrow, flux and everything that life is....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-52270854283178803062015-06-10T07:05:40.453-06:002015-06-10T07:05:40.453-06:00Time is a knot - full of emotions and experiences ...Time is a knot - full of emotions and experiences and places...most importantly people...it unravels easily..all too quickly and chaotically and yet perhaps when we find home we can best deflect the sorrows and loneliness...a beautiful tapestry of words xoJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-69184377624884860342015-06-10T06:43:30.047-06:002015-06-10T06:43:30.047-06:00blue pavilions rise on the horizon... Love this li...blue pavilions rise on the horizon... Love this line it really makes you feel time. Great emotionalan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-35969391644664089842015-06-10T06:23:29.645-06:002015-06-10T06:23:29.645-06:00It is so hard to follow those breadcrumbs home whe...It is so hard to follow those breadcrumbs home when we know that we are traveling in the opposite direction. No wonder those tears fall so freely.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-83069360463187056092015-06-10T05:21:12.923-06:002015-06-10T05:21:12.923-06:00Time flies in a jiffy................Time flies in a jiffy................Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-19812985949057870742015-06-09T19:27:50.374-06:002015-06-09T19:27:50.374-06:00First time visiting. Your art work is amazing!
I l...First time visiting. Your art work is amazing!<br />I love the visual form of your poetry.cosmos camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-52301619581182403202015-06-09T17:52:02.192-06:002015-06-09T17:52:02.192-06:00I don't remember growing older/when did you
Ga...I don't remember growing older/when did you<br />Gah, for sure. For sure.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-6578953344141114202015-06-09T16:51:56.515-06:002015-06-09T16:51:56.515-06:00And at home I am certain you'll find the fiddl...And at home I am certain you'll find the fiddler on your roof helping you to sing your memories. Time flies. You say it much better in your poem--Time weaves and unravels and weaves again.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-18353527437493941482015-06-09T15:29:23.816-06:002015-06-09T15:29:23.816-06:00Hi Annell,
This is a lovely poem but it doesn'...Hi Annell,<br /><br />This is a lovely poem but it doesn't fit the prompt over at D'verse ~ I will be removing the link at D'verse but feel free to link up another poem with a focus on black and white ~ Thanks ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-40441810422635632952015-06-09T15:04:10.087-06:002015-06-09T15:04:10.087-06:00At times, life seems to be just a rapid series of ...At times, life seems to be just a rapid series of blinks, gulps, & deep breaths, punctuated by a bridge of sighs. 6 grandchildren cluster around, reminding us that three daughters that became wives & mothers are now thirty-something.OMG, during which blink did that happen?Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-29465509610717237132015-06-09T14:54:22.155-06:002015-06-09T14:54:22.155-06:00I am glad that you are learning to walk with those...I am glad that you are learning to walk with those companions. I dont know if there will ever be a time without them. They sure do grow up fast, and our time with them so fleating. It is hard to believe my boys are as old as they are. One in middle school now, and that will be over before you know it.Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09037544390731217891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-65615214836887075892015-06-09T11:40:22.724-06:002015-06-09T11:40:22.724-06:00A timeless quality runs through this beautiful poe...A timeless quality runs through this beautiful poem..!<br />Well penned :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-70642795348078698602015-06-09T10:58:39.308-06:002015-06-09T10:58:39.308-06:00Timelessness, illusion, pain, change, freedom, and...Timelessness, illusion, pain, change, freedom, and memories...some of the things I sensed in this wonderful piece. Well done!Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.com