tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post3557816062904869251..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: July 19, 2014 In the Beginning/ Distortion of Time and Space annell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-73727193945752653822014-07-19T18:55:51.796-06:002014-07-19T18:55:51.796-06:00Stretched either way can be a real bother. But it ...Stretched either way can be a real bother. But it hurts just the same! Nicely annell!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-30450602189247448052014-07-19T15:21:30.642-06:002014-07-19T15:21:30.642-06:00Oh my goodness, this is so heartbreaking. Every wo...Oh my goodness, this is so heartbreaking. Every word is well chosen and just filled with an awful hurt.<br /><br />btw, my birthday is May 22nd, as well. Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-36658120434010720052014-07-19T13:21:56.254-06:002014-07-19T13:21:56.254-06:00whew...the bang...the watching them fall..the bein...whew...the bang...the watching them fall..the being unable to help...its one of my greatest fears....and you will pick up those peieces...though some may come along and help along the way...you will have to....its not easy...and if you ever need...i have an ear...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-20919544162833257902014-07-19T11:48:25.579-06:002014-07-19T11:48:25.579-06:00So beautiful, Annell, and heart-rending - the memo...So beautiful, Annell, and heart-rending - the memory of that beautiful baby, the gift that he was, taken back too soon. Somehow the telling of the story may help those pieces find their way. I most love "I float in a dreamscape of desert Mountains Sky".....may those things cradle your heart gently.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-46454992625336946962014-07-19T10:42:23.863-06:002014-07-19T10:42:23.863-06:00Two beautiful pieces that in some way make sense o...Two beautiful pieces that in some way make sense of that broken puzzle..I love the opening line of the first poem- so very tender. I love the silver balloon..like a mirror in the sky..on one side your story...maybe on the other your son..I love how you have played with the idea of distortion in time and space..sometimes the most real..terrible events are those which seem most surreal...I hope in words and form they in some way can at least be expressed if not born outJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com