tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post407599498214706256..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: January 2, 2017 Poets United Poets Pantry/The Turtle Dance 2017/ dVerse/The Unsuspecting Heartannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-123175145505027102017-01-03T12:11:42.797-07:002017-01-03T12:11:42.797-07:00Such a beautifully deep write, Annell ❤️Such a beautifully deep write, Annell ❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-54202405641748164792017-01-03T05:48:57.097-07:002017-01-03T05:48:57.097-07:00i like the details in this native dance.
love the ...i like the details in this native dance.<br />love the quad too. and i think it's about betrayal. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-65101009268765970252017-01-03T00:31:13.739-07:002017-01-03T00:31:13.739-07:00Long poem, but the soul is meaningful.Nice.Long poem, but the soul is meaningful.Nice.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-70401244272964704232017-01-02T21:28:30.930-07:002017-01-02T21:28:30.930-07:00a beautiful beginning, with the dance...the enjoym...a beautiful beginning, with the dance...the enjoyment of life and then the unsuspecting heart...sad & chilling...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-50947403009636669592017-01-02T19:47:43.768-07:002017-01-02T19:47:43.768-07:00I will only comment on the last portion of this po...I will only comment on the last portion of this poem as it is the only portion that meets the specifications of a quadrille and todays prompted word: i too agree wiith Bjorn about the quadrille being so much like a Blake poem and the transition of time. Excellent quad! Next time you write for a dVerse post, you may want to break out the actual part thatbpertains to dVerse and onlynlink that portion.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-85358622338828691712017-01-02T17:38:05.055-07:002017-01-02T17:38:05.055-07:00I really like the repetition of "it is sacred...I really like the repetition of "it is sacred" in the first. The quadrille - the worm eating is such a good image. Well done, you!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-49995282761180927342017-01-02T16:12:44.944-07:002017-01-02T16:12:44.944-07:00Gosh. that is a good quadrille..wonder about a hea...Gosh. that is a good quadrille..wonder about a heart that has its core eaten...great image there, Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-84593243722029034602017-01-02T15:11:46.015-07:002017-01-02T15:11:46.015-07:00I absolutely love The Turtle Dance. And the quadri...I absolutely love The Turtle Dance. And the quadrille is excellently intricate and thought-provoking.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-5763297589785107372017-01-02T15:06:46.013-07:002017-01-02T15:06:46.013-07:00I like the transition of time in the quadrille (&q...I like the transition of time in the quadrille ("day turns to night") and the way that plays with the unsuspecting heart...how true those things are....!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-56376670010075579192017-01-02T14:43:35.888-07:002017-01-02T14:43:35.888-07:00An interesting idea for the unsuspecting heart to ...An interesting idea for the unsuspecting heart to find out that its center has been eaten.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-16992887920151258012017-01-02T14:29:48.030-07:002017-01-02T14:29:48.030-07:00ditto Bjorn. The unsuspecting heart....that title...ditto Bjorn. The unsuspecting heart....that title can apply to so much...I've always thought of an expanding heart...and here we have a heart that is diminishing, disappearing, being eaten. Oh my.lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-65799186081991429382017-01-02T14:14:04.211-07:002017-01-02T14:14:04.211-07:00If we are not careful, we would lose the center of...If we are not careful, we would lose the center of our lives~<br /><br />Good one Annell and thanks for joining us at D'verse~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-60669101663962285472017-01-02T14:05:08.849-07:002017-01-02T14:05:08.849-07:00I agree with Bjorn about The Unsuspecting Heart - ...<br />I agree with Bjorn about The Unsuspecting Heart - reminiscent of Blake's invisible worm in The Sick Rose. I like it!<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-48489404008737924182017-01-02T13:46:13.110-07:002017-01-02T13:46:13.110-07:00Sorry for only commenting on the Quadrille, but i ...Sorry for only commenting on the Quadrille, but i really loves that one... it has the complex simplicity that I feel is a bit like Robert Blake.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-916397408643900982017-01-02T12:31:48.204-07:002017-01-02T12:31:48.204-07:00Thanks for helping us dance along with you! :)Thanks for helping us dance along with you! :)Samyuktha Semi Jayaprakashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03879275723002707278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-9710550727971597722017-01-02T11:52:51.095-07:002017-01-02T11:52:51.095-07:00I hear the drums as my own heartbeat. And yes, sac...I hear the drums as my own heartbeat. And yes, sacred is secret for each of us. Thank you, Annell,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-66758695630850049872017-01-02T11:08:07.184-07:002017-01-02T11:08:07.184-07:00How extremely beautiful this is....the Pueblo, th...How extremely beautiful this is....the Pueblo, the place of peace, the description of watchers and dancers. You took me there. My new fave of yours.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com