tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post4523566921857584267..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: April 5, 2016 dVerse/ Trains to Nowhere and Back Again -- Writer's Digest April PAD Challenge/A Really Bad Experienceannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-3948371665883930612016-04-05T19:08:00.145-06:002016-04-05T19:08:00.145-06:00Sounds awful. I hope the writing helps.Sounds awful. I hope the writing helps.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-43365639097505549782016-04-05T15:35:18.031-06:002016-04-05T15:35:18.031-06:00Beautifully expressed!Beautifully expressed!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-65922211921085036242016-04-05T14:59:37.719-06:002016-04-05T14:59:37.719-06:00Oh what an experience... but I do love the trains ...Oh what an experience... but I do love the trains chugging along... the prairie is like the home for trains..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-34885572905808596722016-04-05T14:58:05.938-06:002016-04-05T14:58:05.938-06:00annell, this is just an amazing line:
"but ...annell, this is just an amazing line: <br /><br />"but it took a long time<br /><br />for the train to catch up with your eyes" <br /><br /><br />The staggered shape of your poem lends itself well to this prompt, and to the tone you've created. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.com