tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post4797758700055883444..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: August 7, 2016 The Sunday Whirl -- Sunday's Whirligig -- Poets United/ Forgotten Contentsannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-43594473091948433522016-08-08T11:37:53.912-06:002016-08-08T11:37:53.912-06:00Well done, with this one... nice well written piec...Well done, with this one... nice well written piece :)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-8896660418170686162016-08-08T06:36:54.927-06:002016-08-08T06:36:54.927-06:00placing 'sin' in archery term is very very...placing 'sin' in archery term is very very clever conceit. Nice piece, enjoyed it. <br />My response to Stacies's prompt is <a href="http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/2016/08/262_8.html" rel="nofollow"> HERE</a><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-12856103153767204642016-08-08T02:23:51.240-06:002016-08-08T02:23:51.240-06:00Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous !!Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous !!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-28462346282942605012016-08-07T19:06:58.463-06:002016-08-07T19:06:58.463-06:00A beautiful piece of writing full of images of the...A beautiful piece of writing full of images of the past and a yearning for those lost times. What moving writing this is.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-31595139072300540742016-08-07T15:14:29.308-06:002016-08-07T15:14:29.308-06:00What a beautiful poem! I know about the fireflies...What a beautiful poem! I know about the fireflies and all else "put away for safe keeping" and often forgotten ... and I love the idea of distancing and the conflagration in the middle. What can forgetting, what can burning be good for? Maybe simply to be in the now, which could also be "put away"--but not yet. Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-59386666700386300672016-08-07T13:09:25.327-06:002016-08-07T13:09:25.327-06:00This piece seems almost crystallised and distilled...This piece seems almost crystallised and distilled - like that light in the jar or a fossilised piece of burnt wood..you have captured both the best and harsh aspects of reality so beautifully - reminding us perhaps that the good and simple pleasures of life really should be kept and treasured forever - you hit the markJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-2750495218844276412016-08-07T12:19:23.251-06:002016-08-07T12:19:23.251-06:00What original thoughts! I cannot comment thorough...What original thoughts! I cannot comment thoroughly on all of the poem's intricacies, but I really like the idea that sin is an archery term...indeed we really do miss the mark oftentimes in our lives!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-13086446812468047822016-08-07T12:08:50.650-06:002016-08-07T12:08:50.650-06:00I can feel the summer day, look with you up to the...I can feel the summer day, look with you up to the mountain, concerned for the wildlife caught in the flames. I can almost smell the Mint! Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-74459878307946418192016-08-07T10:50:44.794-06:002016-08-07T10:50:44.794-06:00True poetry Annell - you carried me away and made ...True poetry Annell - you carried me away and made my Sunday that bit more special... Thank you... With Best Wishes Scottscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.com