tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post4983410227371656729..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: February 12, 2017 Sunday's Whirligig #98 -- Poets United Poets Pantry -- The Sunday Whirl #286/Familiar Melodyannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-6289234141938116922017-02-17T00:07:28.218-07:002017-02-17T00:07:28.218-07:00"hidden canyons a holy silence as if the ri..."hidden canyons a holy silence as if the rider was the first" beautiful, and I have felt that sensation when being out in naturePat Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00760779673175109204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-54266551487937822017-02-13T10:24:06.862-07:002017-02-13T10:24:06.862-07:00This is soo tender so beautifully written.This is soo tender so beautifully written.Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-74772367144524257892017-02-13T10:10:51.648-07:002017-02-13T10:10:51.648-07:00Lovely share!Lovely share!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-39233792907140973762017-02-13T00:05:37.036-07:002017-02-13T00:05:37.036-07:00Your poem brings to mind that song: "I spoke...Your poem brings to mind that song: "I spoke not a word ..." with the cowboy going to his grave rather than dishonor the woman in the long black veil. Yours remains alive, but deepened, silenced, reflective. How else can one be after facing the violence we do to each other?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-17116464407609969542017-02-12T23:10:43.156-07:002017-02-12T23:10:43.156-07:00a few gray strands, ferocity in the eyes, the path... a few gray strands, ferocity in the eyes, the path rugged, & an unkind world are elements needed to enrich a life...no wonder the life bursts forth in songs, so original...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-18171623403078625422017-02-12T19:41:55.579-07:002017-02-12T19:41:55.579-07:00This is quite beautiful and would I guess be full ...This is quite beautiful and would I guess be full of poignant familiarity of what could have been.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-59311703568454413652017-02-12T16:41:52.615-07:002017-02-12T16:41:52.615-07:00I really enjoyed what was (for me) an unusual form...I really enjoyed what was (for me) an unusual form. I found it very organic and synergistic with the content. The piece is very well drawn (it actually reminded me, a bit, of my brother ... and here, I thought he was a one-of ~ha~) And the close is WONDER-FULL! Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-89615398371933364722017-02-12T15:49:13.590-07:002017-02-12T15:49:13.590-07:00I don't quite know why, but I love this sectio...I don't quite know why, but I love this section:<br /><br />"bread and butter <br />gutted and skinned <br />the unforgiven <br />riding his pony"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-33512555509791747612017-02-12T13:24:35.381-07:002017-02-12T13:24:35.381-07:00This poem, like his life, goes full circle!This poem, like his life, goes full circle!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-63093500406546815362017-02-12T13:06:35.831-07:002017-02-12T13:06:35.831-07:00This is like a magic tale... like a manhood ritual...This is like a magic tale... like a manhood ritual.. love that it's the birth of a poet.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-7091126107945749042017-02-12T11:10:13.004-07:002017-02-12T11:10:13.004-07:00The inclusion of sensory stuff---like the burlap s...The inclusion of sensory stuff---like the burlap scratching the skin, the echoes against red rocks and the grey strands that have added to his hair over the years....makes this such an easy scene to picture.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.com