tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post6128583593545503262..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: January 30, 2014 We Write Poems #198/ Child's Playannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-78325204195902764642014-01-31T19:26:32.311-07:002014-01-31T19:26:32.311-07:00i grew up on a hill surrounded by cousins and w us...i grew up on a hill surrounded by cousins and w used to all gather and play...we played a game of night tag called midnite in the graveyard...ha...you conjoured fun memories in this annell....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-32677756886102013162014-01-31T11:23:11.663-07:002014-01-31T11:23:11.663-07:00I love the laughter fluttering behind the children...I love the laughter fluttering behind the children as they run!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-1360425660046637492014-01-30T17:16:27.650-07:002014-01-30T17:16:27.650-07:00Love all the sense details that light up the image...Love all the sense details that light up the image you painted with words like flitting fireflies. And I must admit, I was tempted to do something very similar with the prompt words,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-90889739044741972902014-01-30T13:51:56.788-07:002014-01-30T13:51:56.788-07:00I thought of the Owl City song "Fireflies&quo...I thought of the Owl City song "Fireflies" when I read this...and my own childhood memories of watching fireflies rise up from the grass and give a pre-dusk spectacle, to keep us amused until the stars came out. This is gorgeous.Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-17339262057406835572014-01-30T09:47:24.837-07:002014-01-30T09:47:24.837-07:00I enjoyed your poem - I didn't sense the feeli...I enjoyed your poem - I didn't sense the feeling of loneliness. The ending line gave me more a feeling of wistfulness of days gone by.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-27312057972047439722014-01-30T07:49:46.850-07:002014-01-30T07:49:46.850-07:00Hopper & loneliness...hmm..Hopper & loneliness...hmm..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com