tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post8151467373952844768..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: August 10, 2010 By the Seashoreannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-57171228678355305602010-08-13T01:18:33.989-06:002010-08-13T01:18:33.989-06:00this has a wonderful feeling of the beech, the sea...this has a wonderful feeling of the beech, the sea and timeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08915236568015079389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-65346159694891824142010-08-12T18:51:02.942-06:002010-08-12T18:51:02.942-06:00The last 2 lines really nailed the feeling-- nicel...The last 2 lines really nailed the feeling-- nicely written!<br />http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-56929914208518439802010-08-12T10:23:37.200-06:002010-08-12T10:23:37.200-06:00I love the images that this evoked. And I find it ...I love the images that this evoked. And I find it interesting to read two back-to-back pieces here that speak of time at the shore, written by a desert dweller. I don't think of Taos as getting too hot in summer, but maybe I'm wrong?<br /><br />P.S. Your sunset picture is breathtaking.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-3226603127999947332010-08-12T09:08:50.180-06:002010-08-12T09:08:50.180-06:00I love "this is "it"". that m...I love "this is "it"". that moment of realiztion is wonderful..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-87433813596000916852010-08-11T19:29:59.523-06:002010-08-11T19:29:59.523-06:00so you are a poet as well-- multi talented artist....so you are a poet as well-- multi talented artist.<br />very nice imagery in your poem-- brings memories of the beach.layershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10991288165260934778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-37462439895429260242010-08-11T18:22:59.938-06:002010-08-11T18:22:59.938-06:00I can get lost in all of your words...I also live ...I can get lost in all of your words...I also live by the water and this poem I felt very deeply. Thanks for sharing xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-80743924163432284472010-08-11T17:50:36.811-06:002010-08-11T17:50:36.811-06:00Hmmm. The sea as a metaphor for the ambiguities of...Hmmm. The sea as a metaphor for the ambiguities of life. I see that. I live by the water and find it a metaphor for much of life. The sound of tide and surf become part of the rhythm of life and you seem to have captured those rhythms here. Well written. Thank you.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-89048273869464651702010-08-11T16:37:50.499-06:002010-08-11T16:37:50.499-06:00I felt what Marilyn felt
and i loved itI felt what Marilyn felt<br />and i loved itSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-88411930241729963902010-08-11T15:58:53.572-06:002010-08-11T15:58:53.572-06:00I love this, I feel as though you are carrying mem...I love this, I feel as though you are carrying memories of the sea, and a special someone with you at the sea, wherever you are - as though they are your moveable feast. I may be wrong but I thought that this is beautiful even if I am wrong ;-)Marilyn & Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00851884880790561276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-61495386531593525942010-08-11T14:45:38.232-06:002010-08-11T14:45:38.232-06:00Appreciate the clarification, I had the thought yo...Appreciate the clarification, I had the thought you where addressing death. Nonetheless, I grew up by the ocean and the impressions, sensory and imaginative, have stayed with me. Really liked your poem because it brought the memories back. Thanks, Annelldustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-38618779527876383092010-08-11T14:12:49.100-06:002010-08-11T14:12:49.100-06:00It seems the whole piece is ambiguous, about what ...It seems the whole piece is ambiguous, about what is reality? As the writer, I'm not sure. But thanks for the comment. You made me take another look.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-85115944739129895382010-08-11T10:50:39.295-06:002010-08-11T10:50:39.295-06:00a great feel for the ocean, but is it real, or jus...a great feel for the ocean, but is it real, or just an illusion..i got the feel you were thinking about it but not there...esp since there were no more games to play...as if this was a fond memory...nice one shot.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-75483280731201318392010-08-11T10:35:13.036-06:002010-08-11T10:35:13.036-06:00i love the sea, the waves, the sand, the beaches a...i love the sea, the waves, the sand, the beaches and the shells...thanks for sharing with One Shot..cheers PeteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.com