tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post9048011754255898207..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: November 15, 2015 Poets United -- The Sunday Whirl Wordle #225 -- Sunday's Whirligig #33 -- November PAD Challenge Writers Digest/ War is Your Ritualannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-39726957327540297532015-11-16T13:49:57.480-07:002015-11-16T13:49:57.480-07:00You build up the perpetual motion, the automatic c...You build up the perpetual motion, the automatic closure and continuance of strife to make the last line ring ever louder! If only we could make it not matter tomorrow.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-35811763353517689072015-11-16T08:38:40.413-07:002015-11-16T08:38:40.413-07:00pure cool insights.pure cool insights.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-13203776490514378312015-11-16T07:11:48.824-07:002015-11-16T07:11:48.824-07:00What a powerful poem, Annell. Yes, if people are ...What a powerful poem, Annell. Yes, if people are 'at war' with one another, it definitely won't matter at the end of time who was right... I think this can be read at both a personal and a global level. Chilling really.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-626246263392518402015-11-16T06:13:15.836-07:002015-11-16T06:13:15.836-07:00The most profound truth in this wonderful piece is...The most profound truth in this wonderful piece is in the last line (for me at least)...some people cannot seem to live without a war of some kind...sadly it is often waged against those who deserve more and should be loved xoJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-76583035252472873412015-11-16T04:58:57.318-07:002015-11-16T04:58:57.318-07:00lots of undertones here, war, personal relationshi...lots of undertones here, war, personal relationships. enjoyed the layers of your poem, annelltotomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-44758724879078981142015-11-15T21:19:40.827-07:002015-11-15T21:19:40.827-07:00Well said, Annell. Shame that this is not just fi...Well said, Annell. Shame that this is not just fiction.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-24198898417616524562015-11-15T17:45:41.681-07:002015-11-15T17:45:41.681-07:00Sadly war is ideologically and profit oriented and...Sadly war is ideologically and profit oriented and most solutions attempted exacerbate the situation. What an inheritance we leave for children.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-72949103294376892262015-11-15T16:22:35.993-07:002015-11-15T16:22:35.993-07:00I think you did very well putting it all together,...I think you did very well putting it all together, especially with the wisdom at the conclusion. We seem too often to forget that in future years it won't matter who was right. Perhaps we continue the war for the only reason of saving face, but a face alone is usually a sad thing. <br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-5462310462674493132015-11-15T16:02:43.736-07:002015-11-15T16:02:43.736-07:00true...at distance it won't be seen who was ri...true...at distance it won't be seen who was right....but only deeds....humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-43696189211434476652015-11-15T11:39:51.592-07:002015-11-15T11:39:51.592-07:00Sad when the other person would rather feel "...Sad when the other person would rather feel "right" than be happy. I am weary at the bigger war games being played on the global stage - one bombs the crap out of the other, the other retaliates, then there must be retaliation for that - peace will never be won with bombs. Sigh. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-88567818792454719402015-11-15T11:05:48.489-07:002015-11-15T11:05:48.489-07:00no beginning
no end ...no beginning<br />no end <br />holding on to your position <br />like this present moment<br />we also slowly fade away <br />in a million years <br />it won't matter who was right<br /><br />A lot of truth & depth in this poem :) <br />Beautifully expressed!<br /><br />Lots of love,<br />SanaaSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-35531328682190789202015-11-15T10:56:59.669-07:002015-11-15T10:56:59.669-07:00lovely sentiments.lovely sentiments.koraleahhttps://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2015/11/15/sunday-prompts-words-words-and-thoughts-on-salts/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-6371263166843529792015-11-15T10:56:31.355-07:002015-11-15T10:56:31.355-07:00it does matter who hosts it.it does matter who hosts it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-77154597544085528682015-11-15T10:27:37.748-07:002015-11-15T10:27:37.748-07:00What war can do to a human heart, it can scorch an...What war can do to a human heart, it can scorch and burn the heart... it can make us dead inside.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com