tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post905203992641165513..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: February 7, 2017 deVerse/Sorrow in the Rain that Came annell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-6812005571333608742017-02-08T15:45:10.675-07:002017-02-08T15:45:10.675-07:00very meaningful and most definitely evokes emotion...very meaningful and most definitely evokes emotion. excellent.Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-6636066736664627402017-02-08T12:45:15.088-07:002017-02-08T12:45:15.088-07:00Such depth in this, I felt the angry words swirlin...Such depth in this, I felt the angry words swirling, and the impact on the listener. No proof, just memory, which is enough to the one who suffered the blows. I like the format of this poem, Annell.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-32072782490140322892017-02-08T11:40:14.833-07:002017-02-08T11:40:14.833-07:00SMiles.. oh.. the con-social
emoTions of an
envir...SMiles.. oh.. the con-social<br />emoTions of an <br />environment<br />of Dark DrunK<br />iN thE LiGht<br />oF leARned<br />DancE and<br />SinG to shake iT aLL<br />oFF wHeRebody deFeats<br />a miNd wHeRe juST Araise oF<br />aN arm<br />BRinGs<br />back<br />a muscle<br />meMory oF liGht<br />wiTh fiNgers thaT<br />DAncE and SinG<br />and sure wiTh<br />subatomic<br />quantum<br />flow<br />of <br />spiRit<br />as miNd<br />and BoDy <br />heARt of SoUL<br />BaLanCinG.. woo or<br />not.. whoa.. it works..;)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-14272167253068757702017-02-08T06:18:27.337-07:002017-02-08T06:18:27.337-07:00I learned more about drinking through your poem. N...I learned more about drinking through your poem. Nicely done.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-9371246508939610402017-02-07T21:11:13.242-07:002017-02-07T21:11:13.242-07:00Great work, Annell. Love the rum and raisins in t...Great work, Annell. Love the rum and raisins in the middle.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-92196036908699587142017-02-07T18:16:06.136-07:002017-02-07T18:16:06.136-07:00Volume here is turned way up. Anger is an intoxic...Volume here is turned way up. Anger is an intoxicating g brew. Good mixology for serving up a round of rageWaltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-48305264822532771552017-02-07T18:00:09.428-07:002017-02-07T18:00:09.428-07:00Angry people yelling do often sound like drunken i...Angry people yelling do often sound like drunken idiots, even if they are speaking the truth. a very loud and emotional poem.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-64658051654807769732017-02-07T16:49:51.767-07:002017-02-07T16:49:51.767-07:00People complaining about each other often sound li...People complaining about each other often sound like drunkards talking who need to sleep off their anger. I'm not sure if that was the point, but it is something that came to my mind while reading this.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-36034442549698122512017-02-07T16:00:12.054-07:002017-02-07T16:00:12.054-07:00Well, this is totally my personality, so I had to ...Well, this is totally my personality, so I had to giggle over this toddler-like behavior. :)<br /><br />Love the rum and raisins.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-23158355593329221602017-02-07T15:38:56.018-07:002017-02-07T15:38:56.018-07:00Wow! This poem yells in volume and emotion! Wow!Wow! This poem yells in volume and emotion! Wow!lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-32043933460506684062017-02-07T15:18:08.637-07:002017-02-07T15:18:08.637-07:00Marvelous use of the pub words! Reading here, I a...Marvelous use of the pub words! Reading here, I am once more impressed at the ability of poets to turn their skills to current events. Applause from my corner!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-64036504829410500632017-02-07T14:36:36.896-07:002017-02-07T14:36:36.896-07:00Well there's a cocktail of emotions boiling ar...Well there's a cocktail of emotions boiling around here. Great take on the promptpaul mortimerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17053458852523674877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-17963613298279390762017-02-07T14:18:36.445-07:002017-02-07T14:18:36.445-07:00We are of one mind today, dear lady--even used som...We are of one mind today, dear lady--even used some of the same imagery; startling & joyous to read poetic anger well-directed. Like me, 33 words were just a launching pad; smile.<br />Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-44493748640966616862017-02-07T13:49:40.951-07:002017-02-07T13:49:40.951-07:00You went so far from the tipsy moon you could... l...You went so far from the tipsy moon you could... love the use of all those word to something so profound.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-91173139228445064872017-02-07T13:41:43.586-07:002017-02-07T13:41:43.586-07:00WOW! This packs a punch, Annell. I love the intern...WOW! This packs a punch, Annell. I love the internal rhyme. Impressive volume here, both in number of phrases used, and in voice. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.com