tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post3882250286299368874..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: Hollow/imaginary gardens with real toadsannell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-10873360633586264422019-01-13T21:54:08.458-07:002019-01-13T21:54:08.458-07:00Oh, this hollowness aches to be fulfilled! I love ...Oh, this hollowness aches to be fulfilled! I love how you evoked this universal emotion.Anmol (HA)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02427056865589377093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-56419809953214232972019-01-13T08:48:47.247-07:002019-01-13T08:48:47.247-07:00Oh this is incredibly evocative, Annell!Oh this is incredibly evocative, Annell!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-78183393052687067662019-01-13T00:44:59.639-07:002019-01-13T00:44:59.639-07:00I like the way hollow echoes through your poem, An...I like the way hollow echoes through your poem, Annell, and the different kinds of hollow. I think most of have known a hollow man without a heart, but the hollow shell and hollow home sound lonely.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-29369781642719636652019-01-12T23:29:38.146-07:002019-01-12T23:29:38.146-07:00I could see each hollow place in my mind as you de...I could see each hollow place in my mind as you depicted it.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-64962049446389072762019-01-12T20:00:12.137-07:002019-01-12T20:00:12.137-07:00I love the repetition of the word hollow, and its ...I love the repetition of the word hollow, and its different echoes in the things you mention - bell, voice, person, shell.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-38368436496548338912019-01-12T19:51:02.149-07:002019-01-12T19:51:02.149-07:00that 3rd stanza Annell - it's the pivot in thi...that 3rd stanza Annell - it's the pivot in this poem - and I love it! but then, this poem is so full - rich for the repetition and the clarity of images ... and it translates the emptiness and loss so well; <br /><br />a most excellent poem. it truly is very captivating and beautiful. WildChild47https://www.blogger.com/profile/05903357601592060653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-70201662277471534792019-01-12T18:54:53.605-07:002019-01-12T18:54:53.605-07:00a hollow man... that is sad. but the hollow canyo...a hollow man... that is sad. but the hollow canyon - that I think would be beautiful to fill with echoes. Well pennedMargarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-25215030319319548382019-01-12T18:22:20.081-07:002019-01-12T18:22:20.081-07:00Aww, this is so loving --- as if you love him so m...Aww, this is so loving --- as if you love him so much you will fill his heart in its empty places, even if you get nothing back. This is real love. <3✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-40939832626771732652019-01-12T14:59:19.360-07:002019-01-12T14:59:19.360-07:00Empty but o so resonant -- like yearning ...Empty but o so resonant -- like yearning ...Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-86027652793435449982019-01-12T14:49:48.446-07:002019-01-12T14:49:48.446-07:00This is one of your best Annell. I love the last ...This is one of your best Annell. I love the last line in particular. Reminds me of my ocean in January.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.com