tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post5500525713536842417..comments2024-03-04T15:47:04.422-07:00Comments on Somethings I Think About-Annell: A Poem Made by Hand/Sunday's Whirligig #152annell4http://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-24798414325561594702018-03-13T04:41:49.460-06:002018-03-13T04:41:49.460-06:00beautiful images--you built a poem (as light as ba...beautiful images--you built a poem (as light as balsa wood) that is so visual, it's more like seeing than reading. Lovely.Puff Of Smoke Poemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06704190887579087213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-65501801391323923492018-03-12T16:58:59.450-06:002018-03-12T16:58:59.450-06:00This is exquisite ... mesmeric metaphors and nuanc...This is exquisite ... mesmeric metaphors and nuanced images floating on beautiful words. I agree with Sanaa's use of the word 'profound' in her comment: this piece is 'freeing'. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-1393284656021635282018-03-12T16:15:07.616-06:002018-03-12T16:15:07.616-06:00The freedom to have your poem journey where it wis...The freedom to have your poem journey where it wishes, to know flight, water... beautifulSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-15385252865886684072018-03-11T16:53:09.986-06:002018-03-11T16:53:09.986-06:00I so love this! It brings back many childhood memo...I so love this! It brings back many childhood memories.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-79824438675789398702018-03-11T12:46:55.361-06:002018-03-11T12:46:55.361-06:00'I want my poem to glide on the wind
Float on ...'I want my poem to glide on the wind<br />Float on the waves like balsa wood<br />From some distant island<br />Or a surfer catching a wave'<br /><br />Love this!!💖💖 Beautifully profound!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-446833666671819632018-03-11T12:41:42.681-06:002018-03-11T12:41:42.681-06:00This is so beautiful. I love every line, especiall...This is so beautiful. I love every line, especially finding words for your poem, and the glistening things you bring up to the surface. This is a wonderful metaphor........as we read, we do touch fingertips, across all the miles........a very lovely write, my friend. You have sent me off to the beach to search for some poetic treasures of my own!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-34095568490471200082018-03-11T11:33:09.827-06:002018-03-11T11:33:09.827-06:00I like the connections being made in this poem...c...I like the connections being made in this poem...connections between poet and reader. Through your words we touch fingertips, and that is no small thing.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-29144781498155083122018-03-11T11:23:14.480-06:002018-03-11T11:23:14.480-06:00excellent.excellent.Nicholas Barry Wrighton Napolitano Constantinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12047982294134798318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-73585446934901399712018-03-11T11:06:46.684-06:002018-03-11T11:06:46.684-06:00Finding the words from the wind is just what a poe...Finding the words from the wind is just what a poet needs.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-34868574772384324292018-03-11T10:22:51.436-06:002018-03-11T10:22:51.436-06:00I love how you used the words to create this poem ...I love how you used the words to create this poem that rolls in like the waves....<br /><br />'I want my poem to glide on the wind<br />Float on the waves like balsa wood<br />From some distant island<br />Or a surfer catching a wave'<br /><br />Sometimes they do glide, and sometimes we have to reach to that murky bottom....Brilliant write!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9057172956502874716.post-24517074373484688142018-03-11T09:26:28.176-06:002018-03-11T09:26:28.176-06:00Beautifully written Annell Beautifully written Annell Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com