Sunday, September 1, 2013

September 1, 2013 Poets United

"Death" Comes for Me

When I was a child
"Death" came as a surprise
Now....I expect it
For myself
And for others

As a child
I heard the word
"Death"
It came
For people
And for animals
They never came back

As a young adult
"Death" was a surprise
Unacceptable
Cause for great sorrow

Now I expect "Death"
Know its' kindness
Know its' necessity
Know its' fairness
Know its' promise

I wait for its' gentle knock
On my door
"Death" comes
For me

11 comments:

  1. But hopefully not for many years yet, as you still have so many more paintings to do, my friend! I resonate with our gained understanding that sometimes death even comes as a friend, to release one from suffering. Though there is no getting around our prolonged sorrow over those we love and miss so much. I am STILL grieving Pup, the longest grieving of my life. Perhaps I am grieving Life, too. Loved your poem, kiddo. Deeply reflective and wise, and accepting of the inevitable passage we will make.

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  2. Annell, I never think about my own death. I enjoyed this poem, though it did make me a bit sad.

    Pamela

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  3. to know the kindness of death...now there is a thought to wrap your head around....and the expectation of it...it comes for all...that is for sure...an old friend...

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  4. i like this.. i've kind of made my peace with it these few days. everything dies, and it's easier to live once you know it's kindness...

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  5. Wow, Annell. This poem took my breath away. As you know, I am no stranger to death....and you have captured really well the feelings we have about death at different times in our life. Bravo.

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  6. I like how you show the evolution of your feelings about "death" from childhood up to the present date. I enjoyed the optimistic touch at the end too.

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  7. I appreciate your exploration of the kindness of death. This is a strong write. I like it a great deal, and will read it again now.

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  8. There seems to be an air of resignation in the speaker, quite the opposite of "raging against the dying of the light," which is counseled in the Dylan Thomas poem. I think both are probably needed: resignation and raging. The trick is knowing which to do when!

    Two-Word Whirl

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  9. Death is the one certainty we have in life. Loved your poem, by the way. Many thanks.

    Greetings from London.

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  10. I expect to be at the "station" unpacked with a broad smile. :-)
    Nice capture of your topic.
    ZQ

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  11. You captured a slew of emotions with this one. Although I can understand the "kindness" of death as a "friend", am not sure I have graduated to full acceptance of that reality. Will hope I get there eventually,

    Elizabeth

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