NO, NO, NO
Say it isn’t so
No,no,no
You are too young to go
No, no, no
Time has run out
No, no, no
Our destiny is clear
No, no, no
The heart breaks in two
No, no, no
If I could change your fate
No, no, no
Write a new script
No, no, no
If only it wasn’t so
No, no, no
Death is final
No, no, no
No place for me to go
No, no, no
No place to hide
No, no, no
Words from my heart
Make no difference now
June 19, 2014
10 comments:
ah but they do...they release a bit of what you are feeling inside...another heartfelt bit of the pain you are facing annell...hugs...
it is tough to be confronted with such a message and the words from the heart hopefully make a difference for those that suffer with you... i wish we could write a new script and start anew...
Very sad, Annell. Loss is so difficult, especially when it it is someone so young. Your journey is not an easy one.
Odd how our two poems, coming from vastly different directions, still resonate with each other; one the great things about running with the dVerse dogs. A very touching take on the prompt.
The repetition in your poem highlights the pain and the longing for another scenario, another destiny.
Expressing your pain in this way is a very brave thing to do. It does help (I know this to be true), and your words do make a difference. They do. Wishing you all the best.
repetition is very powerful here... you're heart's words definitely mean something and make a difference
the truth suddenly releases all that tension...no more anxiety to be suffered...such poignant lines...
annell, i watch you, witness your pain, and have little of value i might say, so i hold you instead)))
xo
erin
The pain in the repeated no really bring the pain through in a most powerful way.. wonderful poem..
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