Forgotten Contents
a long time ago in a far away place where yesterday is tomorrow
tomorrow could be any day and today never comes wishes are made
on the wings of fireflies sparkle all night long put away for safe keeping
holes punched in the lid and the lid put on tight ...contents forgotten
you point to a place high on the mountain you tell me timber grows there
we watch for the smoke to rise to fill a summer day blue skies turn gray
you chew a sprig of mint twist it between your fingers hold it under your nose
the smell of mint holds all your memories of other days... in far away places
flames leap up shouts heard all around fire burns the forest
home for many caught with no escape sometimes man can contain the fire
sometimes he can't sometimes even he cannot escape we are told fire can be good
for the forest
but surely it cannot be good for those burned to a crisp... in far away places
to sin is an archery term meaning to miss the mark and who doesn't miss it
sometimes we become irascible but what is the point it could be just child's play
aim for the target and just as easily the arrow seems to have a mind of its' own
its' own trajectory misses the target completely but hits something else
in the park in a far away place on sunday morning
dogs play with frisbees the old oak trees provide shade from the summer sun
friends lay on the grass lovers with hands intwined the scene a painting
visit the museum thrill to see old favorites remember the contents long forgotten
August 7, 2016
9 comments:
True poetry Annell - you carried me away and made my Sunday that bit more special... Thank you... With Best Wishes Scott
I can feel the summer day, look with you up to the mountain, concerned for the wildlife caught in the flames. I can almost smell the Mint!
What original thoughts! I cannot comment thoroughly on all of the poem's intricacies, but I really like the idea that sin is an archery term...indeed we really do miss the mark oftentimes in our lives!
This piece seems almost crystallised and distilled - like that light in the jar or a fossilised piece of burnt wood..you have captured both the best and harsh aspects of reality so beautifully - reminding us perhaps that the good and simple pleasures of life really should be kept and treasured forever - you hit the mark
What a beautiful poem! I know about the fireflies and all else "put away for safe keeping" and often forgotten ... and I love the idea of distancing and the conflagration in the middle. What can forgetting, what can burning be good for? Maybe simply to be in the now, which could also be "put away"--but not yet.
A beautiful piece of writing full of images of the past and a yearning for those lost times. What moving writing this is.
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous !!
placing 'sin' in archery term is very very clever conceit. Nice piece, enjoyed it.
My response to Stacies's prompt is HERE
much love...
Well done, with this one... nice well written piece :)
ZQ
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