Monday, November 22, 2010

Monday 22, 2010 Potluck Poetry/ Magic, Miracles, Wonder and Wizardry

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Challenge is to write a powm about magic, miracles, wonder and wizardry.

On a Day in Early Fall
My life was filled with magic,
On the first day that we went out,
Followed the list,
Penned by hand.

You said, "It was all that was needed."

Was it magic we were seeking,
On a day in early fall?

First,OFFICE SUPPLY,
He balanced himself,
On my rear view mirror,
Shinny black, a tight wire walker,
Spread his wings for balance,
Spun around like a clown,
Drew our attention to his act.

You said, "It was all that was needed."

Was it magic we were seeking,
On a day in early fall?

Second, was to find a tiny repair shop,
But instead we walked into a wonderland,
Filled with miniatures,
Created by a wizard,
Each tiny spindle,
Transformed to prefection.

You said, "It was all that was needed."

Was it magic we were seeking,
On a day in early fall?

Next, BOOK STORE,
Found my way to the back,
Reached up as high as I could reach,
Found the book filled with magic.

You said, "It was all that was needed."

Was it magic we were seeking,
On a day in early fall?

11 comments:

  1. What you wrote here was all that was needed.

    Nice job, Annell!

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  2. You said, "It was all that was needed."

    Was it magic we were seeking,
    On a day in early fall?

    love the repeating questions and statement, this is authentic magic, we need only know it ourselves...

    Thanks for the superb contribution to potluck week 11.
    you rock!
    Happy Thanksgiving.
    Happy Tuesday!

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  3. Annell, Have a Blessed Thanksgiving...bkm

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  4. carefully chosen words - what a nice poem!

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  5. awwee Magically beauitufl! I enjoyed it!

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  6. Enjoyed your direct yet far from superficial style. You convey a sense of magic in the prosaic with some whimsical yet detailed imagery and a nice use of repeating refrain. Nicely done.

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  7. awesome write my friend...I loved the style

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  8. week 11 potluck awards/treats 4 u

    Thanks for the beautiful contribution to week 11, hope to see you next Monday!
    Happy Thursday!
    Happy Thanksgiving Holiday if you celebrate!

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  9. I loved the magical journey and the questioning. Lovely poem!

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  10. How you created the magic as you made your way. Beautiful poem.

    Happy Thanksgiving.

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  11. Filled with tantalizing questions. I liked it. I also love the picture on your header. It's great.

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