Friday, August 8, 2014

August 8, 2014 dVerse/You

40 words or less

You
Are the one
The one and only you

You are me
I am you

The answer to my prayers
Fulfilled all my wishes

The big hole in my heart
I gather the lost love
Left by your leaving

You......


8 comments:

  1. A melancholy piece. Well written... you say a lot in a few words!

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  2. To severe a symbiosis of life -- nothing can be more sad-

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  3. that is a hard hole to fill.
    and in some ways you never will.
    three will be other things you love
    but def not the same.

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  4. so hard...every word bearing the unbearable.....

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  5. so tough... palpable loss in this... and there's no one who can take their place.. hugs..

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  6. You could not have said it better, Annell. When that one and only has gone, that ache stays with you forever, I suspect. I turn mine into a shrine inside my heart, and I talk to him there. Still doesnt cut it.

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  7. I find that hole seems to be nearly impossible to fill... tough.

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  8. Such emptiness when someone dear is lost for whatever reasons. Takes time to heal! Nicely annell!

    Hank

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