Tuesday, June 27, 2017

A Blessing True --dVerse

A BLESSING TRUE

like a veil                     thin gauzy                    used in motion pictures

a world without flaws     blemishes disappear               like a dream

a garden chime sounds /caught by a gentle breeze        it floats down
                                                                                     around you       

comforts you                like a protective shield             protects you
                                                                                    from harm

                       

you hold out your hands to me /palms side up         make a little cup          

an offering you extend/i hold out my hands to you/ i accept your gift                     

a blessing indeed          like the sunset                  a gift of gold

i give back to you       as blessings go              not too big/nor too small                                          
i pull it close around me           the gift is perfect        after all

June 27, 2017


            

10 comments:

  1. Love that sound-image of the garden chime, floating down around you. Gorgeous!

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  2. This is a beautifully fashioned blessing of a poem. Thank You.

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  3. A beautiful poem. The feeling was amazingly brought out with the words <3

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  4. I liked the holding out of hands to give and receive.

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  5. Lovely with those hands... I think we need more hands to give and receive blessings.

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  6. Gayle Walters RoseJune 27, 2017 at 2:09 PM

    I echo the same sentiments referring to the hands that give and receive the blessings. Somehow it makes it more intimate and meaningful. Your words are very beautiful.

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  7. Beautiful words. I could almosts hear the garden chime!

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  8. I love the giving and accepting of the gifts and blessings ~ It is perfect ~

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  9. I love that exchange of blessings from cupped hands........

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  10. Feeling fresh and good after reading....beautifully written!

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