A BLESSING TRUE
like a veil thin gauzy used in motion pictures
a world without flaws blemishes disappear like a dream
a garden chime sounds /caught by a gentle breeze it floats down
around you
around you
comforts you like a protective shield protects you
from harm
from harm
you hold out your hands to me /palms side up make a little cup
an offering you extend/i hold out my hands to you/ i accept your gift
a blessing indeed like the sunset a gift of gold
i give back to you as blessings go not too big/nor too small
i give back to you as blessings go not too big/nor too small
i pull it close around me the gift is perfect after all
June 27, 2017
11 comments:
Love that sound-image of the garden chime, floating down around you. Gorgeous!
This is a beautifully fashioned blessing of a poem. Thank You.
A beautiful poem. The feeling was amazingly brought out with the words <3
I liked the holding out of hands to give and receive.
Lovely with those hands... I think we need more hands to give and receive blessings.
I echo the same sentiments referring to the hands that give and receive the blessings. Somehow it makes it more intimate and meaningful. Your words are very beautiful.
Beautiful words. I could almosts hear the garden chime!
I love the giving and accepting of the gifts and blessings ~ It is perfect ~
I love that exchange of blessings from cupped hands........
Feeling fresh and good after reading....beautifully written!
An enticing story poem - I am glad she got out in time
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