Oh dear, reveal....
To conceal?
Or to reveal it all...
That is the question?
Pandora opens her box
And spreads before you
Her treasures,
All soft and warm,
Beautiful colors,
Glitter, sparkle and shine
Laughter is heard......
The precious things
Are returned to her box,
Never to see the light of day,
Don't even ask.
They are hidden in a place
You will never look
Buried beneath your own heart.
17 comments:
I like this ... reveal and/or conceal, always a dilemma.
Very nice!
Subtle surprise ending there - very nice indeed.
are these bags! i LOVE them!
nice. love the inclusion of pandora's box...it opens the door for further interpretation...i will say my boys keep treasures in boxes under hte beds from when we walk...nicely played annell....
Off topic - or more specifically - unrelated to this (written) poem and pertaining to your (visual) desert poems - I went to your site. Beautiful work. Are you familiar with John Himmelfarb? (JohnHimmelfarb.com) Chicago-based artist, abstract, cityscapes as well as caligraphic works, painting and on paper. I think you would enjoy him.
beautiful poem,
a box is an excellent reveal tool.
a box on one's heart is another case.
perfect take!
Don't even ask.
They are hidden in a place
You will never look
Very nice
I like the ending, about the place you'll never look (until you do, of course...)
Nice exposition of 'reveal'.
Yes. Where those thoughts and feelings belong. Quiet is good. So well said.
Interesting. And yes, what are those in the photo?
Pandora's box revealing laughter. "Don't even ask.
They are hidden in a place
You will never look"
Well written poem, annell
"They are hidden in a place
You will never look
Buried beneath your own heart." If the heart is heavy enough even a psychologist can't prise them out!
Lovely decorations. Are they bags?
oh yes, to reveal or conceal is always a dilemma! :)
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Dream catchers, aren't they? Revealed, concealed, hiding in plain sight or right beneath your own heart. Lovely Annell as always. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing. Gay (@beachanny)
Buried beneath the heart... beautiful...
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