Saturday, November 2, 2013

Saturday November2, 2013 Sunday Whirl #133

Whisperings of the Heart

The possibilities
Are infinite
Listen to 
The whisperings
Of your own heart
There is a rhythm
That will fit
You like
Cinderella's shoe

Your impulse
Will be to pull
You feet from 
The shoes
But wait...
Only after
You have walked
A long distance
Will you know

The invisible
Will become visible
Open your hands
Release the fists
You are precisely
Where you need
To be

Kneel down
Give thanks
You will hit upon
The creation
That is your's alone
The one you
Have been looking for

Note:  The words carried me along like a fairy tale.  

Prompt:  infinite, hit, invisible, emits, rhythm, impulse,
distance, kneel, creation, whisperings, fists, precise


7 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice...i like the kneeling down to meet creation that is uniquely you...and the call to listen to the whisper of your heart as well....happy saturday annell...

brenda w said...

...you are precisely where you need to be...
There is comfort in those words. Nicely done, Annell.

Jae Rose said...

This brought me back full circle to the magic of the red shoes..magic slippers should be in all our hearts (and pockets) x

Unknown said...

You are precisely
Where you need
To be
sometimes we just need to be reminded of this !

flaubert said...

I love this poem, Annell. But this part is special for me, because of its truth;
"The invisible
Will become visible
Open your hands
Release the fists
You are precisely
Where you need
To be"

Pamela

Old Egg said...

How aptly your words echo your work as an artist. Creativity comes in many forms and it appears the ones you have chosen compliment each other.

nan said...

Lovely and centering poem, Annell!

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