Trains to Nowhere and Back Again
trains to
nowhere trains across the prairie the little train in chama
two years
ago ...no...four years ago we road the little train
a lovely fall
day dappled light through the forrest
red and
yellow flashing by the window that was the second time
the first time was
the longest day of my life it seemed to go on forever
you could see the
distant horizon but it took a long time
for the train to
catch up with your eyes chug chugging along
April 5, 2016
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A Really Bad
Experience
it probably wasn't
the first time nor the last intentions misread
you said
disagreeable and yet i remember i trailed along
just to be with
you i got coffee and rolls for her got water for you both
got cough drops when your throat hurt i admit
i became
nervous as i watched the sands in the hourglass
running out time
was short as it always is
i wanted to make a
plan but that couldn't have been it as i wasn't allowed to
finish what i was
saying i began to speak and the “shit hit the fan”
such an
eruption an explosion i thought at first
there was a
misunderstanding but upon examination you were reacting
to my first
words actually repeating my words which was only an introduction
to what i actually
wanted to say in amazement i said you were being rude
then i just watched the action like a war movie private ryan
everything
happening at once bombs going off she completely out of control
you joining in no
it is not something i would ever want to experience again
especially not as
the target that seemed to be on my back every arrow found its' mark
April 5, 2016
Note: This was a very bad experience for me, it was not my intention to start something that day
and it seems I will have to write about it.... until I don't.
4 comments:
annell, this is just an amazing line:
"but it took a long time
for the train to catch up with your eyes"
The staggered shape of your poem lends itself well to this prompt, and to the tone you've created.
Oh what an experience... but I do love the trains chugging along... the prairie is like the home for trains..
Beautifully expressed!
Sounds awful. I hope the writing helps.
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