Secrecy
what is really
secret after all or are all things secret your thoughts
your actions the
very center of your heart the way you look at me
your hand nestled
into mine the smile at the corner of your lips if it is for all to
see
is nothing
secret the words whispered the writing on a small piece of folded
paper
slipped into my
pocket a precious gift hidden among other treasures
plans and
conspiracies hatched in the darkest night my love for you
perhaps not posted
on a billboard yet... not secret either
May 4, 2016
11 comments:
It is so lovely to know that you have that great blessing in your life, my friend. I like the smile at the corner of his mouth, the small note slipped into your pocket. Sigh. Lovely.
such precious gifts are the light of life....
On this intimate level of two, nothing is more beautiful than the non-secret secret that keeps the world going round.
It's nice when lovers's secrets reveal no secrets that their love is real. Enjoyed this.
Such a lovely write :D
This is so beautifully intimate--lovely!
I like how this shifted back and forth. Excellent.
The secret understanding between two heart, what could be more precious
Much love...
"not pasted on the billboard yet..."
That's so true.
I really liked the tone. There's a certain beauty to it.
-HA
I get a real kick out of your fomatting as I can read it in nearly any direction and the poem has different meanings and constructions. Beautiful poem and brilliant construction.
Small letters held close to the heart are far better than billboards - a treasure of a poem xo
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