Razzle Dazzle Sparkle
all something i see something we all see the showiness of stars
showing off shooting off capturing me
astonishing me my mouth open in amazement across the sky
bright star explodes shower of stars like rocket's bright glare
frozen in amazement on the darkest night the brightest light
on the surface of the waves effervescence sparkles
florescence tiny sea creatures shine in a world i do not know
a parallel universe my world above see in the world between
a glimpse of the world below mysterious individuals i'll never know
on another dark night lightening flashes lights up the sky
extends over the earth lights my path again the brightest light
rises above the mountain in morning the brilliant sun high above
reflects on shards of broken glass sparkles reflected in your eyes
the same color as the sky... that far away blue
October 4, 2016
-AS
10 comments:
Wonderful poem...the stars above us, the tiny glowing sea creatures below us, and us in the middle of it all.
The images here are to absolutely die for ❤️ Beautifully done.
Ah, yes. The sparkle of stars. The glisten of sea. Perfect.
I do love this.. I wish I could ever get access to a starry sky like this... this is like van Gogh in words
Somehow my comments are not appearing on a number of the posts I replied to yesterday??? Have been having trouble with my internet connection so apologies -- BUT, what I said before was this --
I LOVE the idea of comparing the world above, the world we stand in, and the world below us within the waters. The creatures within the seas -- the brilliance and shine of the starry sky, the glistening waters. Beautifully done. And I always enjoy your format.
Breathtaking imagery of nature's wonders. Gorgeous!
So beautiful, especially the thought of the tiny sea creatures, shining in that world we do not know.......and I can SEE the blue of his eyes - that faraway sky blue.
i muSt say A greAtest
razzle dazzle perHaps 'then'
i ever fELt was/iS at a moonlit
beach with diatoms
singing
naked
back at me..
Perhaps it was the
mood but it was real..
ah..
so
isREAL..
liGhts oF DiAtom liFe..:)
I read this like short gasps between the wonder - just lovely
So lovely the way you highlight the earth's dazzles and mysteries and end with a more intimate dazzle of sky blue eyes.
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