The Turtle Dance 2017
it was early on new years day we entered the pueblo the sun was not shining
snow still on the ground the sound of our footsteps crunched in the cold morning air
nostrils filled with the smell of pinion smoke the dance had not started
no one spoke we moved among the pueblo dogs who greeted us warmly
we found our places among the women wrapped in colorful blankets
at the base of the oldest pueblo building inhabited for over one thousand years
nostrils filled with the smell of pinion smoke the dance had not started
no one spoke we moved among the pueblo dogs who greeted us warmly
we found our places among the women wrapped in colorful blankets
at the base of the oldest pueblo building inhabited for over one thousand years
right at the foot of taos mountain soon the dancers entered the plaza
the snow began to fall lightly i want you to imagine the way it was
perhaps there were 20 dancers all men some young/some old
the turtle dance is a line dance ancient old/sacred the drummer took his place
behind the dancers as he began to beat the drum the dancers began to sing and dance
to the rhythm of the drum each dressed in moccasins jingles and fur at their
ankles
ankles
each wore handmade crocheted white leggings woven white wraps/woven belts
mostly red
mostly red
bare chested some wore white beads some wore a band of shells from one
shoulder
shoulder
the bottom of their faces painted white as though they wore beards
each wore a feathered headdress some woven cloth or animal fur down
their backs
their backs
and a fox skin dangled from the back of their belts turtle shells with rattles near
their knees
their knees
and each held a white painted gourd rattle shaped like a turtle shell/ tied with tiny
evergreen twigs
evergreen twigs
if it sounds magical to you it is we experienced
the turtle dance
i cannot say what else happened in that “thin place” for each one
the experience is sacred and to the pueblo people if it is sacred
/it is secret
/it is secret
January 2017/ Happy New Year
This poem is a poem within a poem, an experience within an experience, meanings
unexplained, tying the thread to what is ancient old sacred, in a crazy mad world, there
are still places of peace.
This poem is a poem within a poem, an experience within an experience, meanings
unexplained, tying the thread to what is ancient old sacred, in a crazy mad world, there
are still places of peace.
The Unsuspecting
Heart
the worm curls around the heart eats the center
looks for
another curls again eats some more
day turns to
night there he hides waiting for the unsuspecting heart
without warning the
heart feels the curl welcomes it
only to find his
center eaten
January 2, 2017
17 comments:
How extremely beautiful this is....the Pueblo, the place of peace, the description of watchers and dancers. You took me there. My new fave of yours.
I hear the drums as my own heartbeat. And yes, sacred is secret for each of us. Thank you, Annell,
Elizabeth
Thanks for helping us dance along with you! :)
Sorry for only commenting on the Quadrille, but i really loves that one... it has the complex simplicity that I feel is a bit like Robert Blake.
I agree with Bjorn about The Unsuspecting Heart - reminiscent of Blake's invisible worm in The Sick Rose. I like it!
If we are not careful, we would lose the center of our lives~
Good one Annell and thanks for joining us at D'verse~
ditto Bjorn. The unsuspecting heart....that title can apply to so much...I've always thought of an expanding heart...and here we have a heart that is diminishing, disappearing, being eaten. Oh my.
An interesting idea for the unsuspecting heart to find out that its center has been eaten.
I like the transition of time in the quadrille ("day turns to night") and the way that plays with the unsuspecting heart...how true those things are....!
I absolutely love The Turtle Dance. And the quadrille is excellently intricate and thought-provoking.
Gosh. that is a good quadrille..wonder about a heart that has its core eaten...great image there,
I really like the repetition of "it is sacred" in the first. The quadrille - the worm eating is such a good image. Well done, you!
I will only comment on the last portion of this poem as it is the only portion that meets the specifications of a quadrille and todays prompted word: i too agree wiith Bjorn about the quadrille being so much like a Blake poem and the transition of time. Excellent quad! Next time you write for a dVerse post, you may want to break out the actual part thatbpertains to dVerse and onlynlink that portion.
a beautiful beginning, with the dance...the enjoyment of life and then the unsuspecting heart...sad & chilling...
Long poem, but the soul is meaningful.Nice.
i like the details in this native dance.
love the quad too. and i think it's about betrayal. :)
Such a beautifully deep write, Annell ❤️
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