THE STORY OF A FISHERMAN AND THE SILENCE AFTERWARD
summers at the bay home on the third coast on the water a lifetime
grew up to be the man you were a fisherman
one with the fish met them for breakfast in their favorite spot
and later for tea you walked among them scratched their chin
never had to try it all came naturally knew how it worked
the catch was yours in the silence afterward walked the shore
with the carpenter hand in hand/a ritual the sky sunny and blue
in the sand among the pebbles and shells was a sigh
made of memories and wishes of lovely days gone bye
that was the whole of it nothing more to tell…
Note: The first two stanzas are made up of five lines. The last is one and one half.
I wanted the ending to come at an unexpected place, and that is the way of endings in life, sometime they come too soon, and come unexpectedly. Perhaps like children, we protest, we say, “But I am still playing, I am not through!” Still, the time has come, the game is over.
13 comments:
in the sand among the pebbles and shells was a sigh
I think this line is just awesome. Happy Sunday Annell
much love...
"in the sand among the pebbles and shells was a sigh
made of memories and wishes.........Such poignant lines! Felt it.
This is my new favorite from you, Annell!💞 Like others I also loved; "in the sand among the pebbles and shells was a sigh".. Beautifully penned!💞
Sometimes there is nothing more to tell... days have ends and beginning, and sometimes we are just there to be.
Such a beautiful story, and memory....and yes, the silence after - the endings that come too soon.
So often "nothing more to tell" says it all....true of much of life.
My husband was a fisherman who died far too young while on a fishing trip, so I identified with every line of this, Annell. So beautifully written, and bittersweet for me to read.
And that sigh might not have an ending,
Elizabeth
I love how you set the ending....yes life ends unexpectedly doesn't it.....I found such peace in your fishing tale....as much peace as I found when I fished quietly meeting the fish for breakfast!
This is wonderFULL! ... a sigh ... of lovely days gone bye ...exquisite ... an indelible image, really.
The beauty of poetry in all its different forms is the way it makes the readers feel as they absorb the words of the story and the way they are presented (much like a delicious meal!) Reading this was a beautiful experience for me so I commend you highly for making me feel this way.
sighs made of memories... of unexpected endings... what can one do...but sigh!
made of memories and wishes of lovely days gone bye Love it.
Your poem gives me such a peaceful feeling as being absorbed in a good moment.
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