Sunday, October 29, 2017

THE STORY OF A FISHERMAN AND THE SILENCE AFTERWARD/The Sunday Whirl -- Sunday's Whirligig -- Poets United Poets Pantry

THE STORY OF A FISHERMAN AND THE SILENCE AFTERWARD

summers at the bay              home on the third coast       on the water a lifetime        

grew up to be                        the man you were                 a fisherman

one with the fish                   met them for breakfast         in their favorite spot

and later for tea                     you walked among them      scratched their chin



never had to try                     it all came naturally              knew how it worked            

the catch was yours              in the silence afterward      walked the shore

with the carpenter                hand in hand/a ritual          the sky sunny and blue

in the sand                             among the pebbles and shells         was a sigh



made of memories                and wishes                             of lovely days gone bye                   

that was the whole of it        nothing more to tell…





Note:  The first two stanzas are made up of five lines.  The last is one and one half.
I wanted the ending to come at an unexpected place, and that is the way of endings in life, sometime they come too soon, and come unexpectedly.  Perhaps like children, we protest, we say, “But I am still playing, I am not through!”  Still, the time has come, the game is over.





                                   
                                                                                                                                               





                                                                                                                                   




13 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

in the sand among the pebbles and shells was a sigh

I think this line is just awesome. Happy Sunday Annell

much love...

Sumana Roy said...

"in the sand among the pebbles and shells was a sigh



made of memories and wishes.........Such poignant lines! Felt it.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is my new favorite from you, Annell!💞 Like others I also loved; "in the sand among the pebbles and shells was a sigh".. Beautifully penned!💞

brudberg said...

Sometimes there is nothing more to tell... days have ends and beginning, and sometimes we are just there to be.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Such a beautiful story, and memory....and yes, the silence after - the endings that come too soon.

Mary said...

So often "nothing more to tell" says it all....true of much of life.

indybev said...

My husband was a fisherman who died far too young while on a fishing trip, so I identified with every line of this, Annell. So beautifully written, and bittersweet for me to read.

Anonymous said...

And that sigh might not have an ending,

Elizabeth

Donna@LivingFromHappiness said...

I love how you set the ending....yes life ends unexpectedly doesn't it.....I found such peace in your fishing tale....as much peace as I found when I fished quietly meeting the fish for breakfast!

Wendy Bourke said...

This is wonderFULL! ... a sigh ... of lovely days gone bye ...exquisite ... an indelible image, really.

Old Egg said...

The beauty of poetry in all its different forms is the way it makes the readers feel as they absorb the words of the story and the way they are presented (much like a delicious meal!) Reading this was a beautiful experience for me so I commend you highly for making me feel this way.

Thotpurge said...

sighs made of memories... of unexpected endings... what can one do...but sigh!

Marja said...

made of memories and wishes of lovely days gone bye Love it.
Your poem gives me such a peaceful feeling as being absorbed in a good moment.

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