THE GIFT YOU GAVE ME WAS AS DARK AS A PIECE OF COAL
you shared your perspective not that it was asked for after
all i had no idea
i was in need of it could use it funny how that is
you said it yourself many people… many many people
think their perspective the only one the right one and surely
you do too
you do too
it isn’t always true you meant well for my own good
still you didn’t ask me do you have a reason why it works for
for you
for you
why do you choose to do it that way still it seems
the gift you gave is a dark one but there is
beauty in the dark
beauty in the dark
much to be learned in the shadows you have given me that
opportunity
opportunity
a gift indeed tied with black crepe i would not have known
had no way to know you broadened my view it was your gift
you opened my eyes and thrust it into my heart as if to kill
had no way to know you broadened my view it was your gift
you opened my eyes and thrust it into my heart as if to kill
May 30, 2017
It is amazing to realize that no two perspectives are exactly alike. We each see a unique world and experience a unique lifetime. Remaining open to the stories of others allows us to tap into many, many lifetimes. –Branaird Carey
"Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift." Mary Oliver
"Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift." Mary Oliver
13 comments:
...much to be learned in the shadows......
Indeed. A gift given...from whose perspective?
A thought provoking piece with an excellent title.
I agree with Lillian - and I love the title, Anell!
I think you are right... we learn the most from the darkest gifts... I can see that this reflected in the quote by Mary Oliver.
Point well taken. Our lessons often come in disguise. Love the Oliver quote too!
Some gifts we need to be wary of.
This is so wonderfully deep and wise. We must be aware of such gifts.
So much yes to this:
but there is
beauty in the dark
I love the Oliver quote, as well. Wonderful.
This is wonderfully wise, wisdom born from pain. I love the Oliver quote.
Real surprise ending; you had me thinking this was a good thing, then pow. This one has a real punch
yeah...a gift of darkness...but we learn..
Took me a long time to realize I need to listen to myself first, and your poem described that revelation so well. Thanks for posting!
Icicle
Rain of
Grey Day
Winter's dARk..
SinGs BluE
sKeYes
aBoDe
aBoVe
mELt
NoW oF
HeArT GiFt
SonG sPiRiT
soUL RisES MounTaiN
SnoW whiTE.. DriFt..:)
The gifts which teaches us are really an wonderful gift! Loved the coal comparison!!
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