ANCIENT CARAVAN
sunlight shimmers across the sand caravans loaded with silks and exotic perfumes
guided by the stars there
is a rhythm to their passage it
is the same
as their father’s before them nights in the desert are chilly they pitch tents
of colored sheets plum
and red in the last light of day
fires glow golden rival
sparkling stars above
the prophet tells stories ancient
history of the people
their past journeys and of journeys to come a shot sounds
echoes in the canyon rumors
of bandits persuade them
to
pick a new route it would be foolish to continue on the same
light from the full moon lights
the desert shimmers across the sand
creates a new world
nothing seems the same many
days
and nights before
they reach their destination the
caravan vulnerable
July 9, 2017
15 comments:
What a magical journey.. makes me want to join the caravan
We, I think, are the caravan, and we are very vulnerable...
I feel we are all moving in that caravan... very visual... and we all need the oasis.
I love the story of the caravan painted by moonlight and then the understory of our humanity/world as the caravan....really well done!
You have given us a sense of this journey & the vulnerability of the caravan.
I didn't want this to stop, but wanted to see the vulnerable caravan safely to its destination! A compelling write.
I suppose we're all on our own caravan, as is the course of this world. Great writing Annell.
This poem contains so many lovely images, Annell. I am most struck by the sheets of plum and red.
What an incredible picture you have painted here with your words. Rich colors and textures ... a journey through exotic lands ... danger under a full moon. A wonderful, poetic 'get-away'. Loved this!
This poem has so many great images. Lovely writing.
What a timeless poem this is Annell which is so beautifully illustrated by your words describing the journey.
I was totally transported to this caravan world and the journey. Beautiful description.
nothing seems the same
many days and nights
before they reach their destination
the caravan vulnerable
Gives a picture of cautious travel by caravans in the desert. Without road signs the stars are the guide. Very vulnerable.Very true annell!
Hank
Hank
This poem has such a beautifully timeless quality!
Delicious metaphor at play here. You paint quite the picture.
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