THE UNBORN CHILD
you catch a glimpse of the unborn child running in the background
she is on her way moon beams light her path she comes from the
sea
in her pocket is a string tied around her finger and today's post
a small blue letter carefully penned within is her name
nothing else all that she is and all that she will ever be
is carried in her name her mama waits for her it is a time of bliss
she slips out of her sandals to walk in the sand pink grains between
her toes
her toes
she dons her wig-hat and pinks her lips draws on her face
a new mask shakes the sand from her feet delighted as she looks
in the mirror
in the mirror
July 23, 2017
Note: I have combined the words from Sunday's Whirligig and The Sunday Whirl. Not all the words spoke to me....but I give myself permission to use only the words that resonate in this moment. The other words I will leave and let others find a place for them in their poems.
The idea of the unborn child came from the movie, Daughters of the Dust, one of my favorites. The movie creates a scene, of the what is happening just before the birth...and in the background you can see the unborn child running, coming to the place of her birth. The unborn child narrates the scene.
"Languid look at the Gullah culture of the sea islands off the coast of South Carolina and Georgia where African folk-ways were maintained well into the 20th Century and was one of the last bastions of these mores in America. Set in 1902." (This is a description of the film from the Daughters of the Dust site.)
18 comments:
Beautiful imagery Annell - the prompt words fit in effortlessly
Annell I adore the images this poem evokes...the unborn child running in the sand on her way to be born....just lovely!
"She is on her way" and I can see her, running in the field with her bright face. Lovely, Annell.
You paint good imagery with your well placed words in your poem
What an absolute delight to read and watch her making her way to her birth. I love your poem and now must see this movie. Where?
Elizabeth
I've a fascination with the Gullah culture. Your words capture me!
That was delightful.
ZQ
Beautiful imagery here!
Love the imaginative way you have written this poem, Annell. You have given voice to this unborn child.
I really loved the poem and the images that formed in my mind as I read it. Absolutely beautiful.
Delightful images captivate the mind at once. "she is on her way moon beams light her path"....This has such a fairy tale touch to it! Gorgeous.
Such a beautiful touchy read. I loved it
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A lovely way to paint these images. A delight to read.
Your manner of setting out lines across the page is quite signature - an innovative way of conveying the idea across the horizontal plain. It makes me sit up and take notice of the phrasing.
The words skip along like I imagine she does.
Hope all unborn children find their way to Earth & without any illness or deformity, may all take birth...
Your poem took me down the memory lane when I first "met" my unborn child & delightfully awaited her birth.
I really like the closing delight..
I really like the glimpses into the speaker's wants, the what ifs... And I love the haiku, the image of students and master sharing and being poetry.
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