Saturday, September 30, 2017

Fiestas, Carnivals, Celebrations/ Sunday's Whirligig -- Can We Meet in The Middle?/ The Sunday Whirl --Poets United Poetry Pantry

Fiestas, Carnivals, Celebrations  

the sound of drums                  wafting across the sage             comforting to know

traditions continue                   often with rattles                      and dancing

ancient old                               original meaning                      unknown to me

perhaps a prayer                       gratitude for being                    and for all other beings

that share a space in the garden            easy to imagine             an ancient world



where sacred secrets were allowed        honored                       and never shared

the drummers hold sticks         handed down                           for generations

the parrot repeats                     what he hears               like the silver-tongued devil

seen at the carnival                   thunder in the mountains         the old man clears his throat

punch and judy                        play their parts             we have seen it before/still each time unique

September 30, 2017   Sunday's Whirligig 




Can We Meet in The Middle?

the words are served mixed up             a mulligan stew            we take sides

argue until the sun sets in the west        gasping to catch our breath       we tilt at windmills

where to begin                         how to see the other side          another point of view

we feed our own positions                   our inability to disagree gracefully        is a crime

perhaps it is an art form           in which we are not trained      we argue

we deliver our own point of view        we sing our opinions    at the top of our voices

we injure those on the other side          murder is not too great a crime     we will not listen         

we feed on our own positions              perhaps we could meet in the middle   find meeting ground

October 1, 2017   The Sunday Whirl

Note:  I had just read Maria's Sunday Paper, scroll down, News and Views Above the Noise.  1.  A View for your dining table conversation.  It is about how we have lost the art of disagreement.         

                       
                          



                       




7 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love those ceremonies which touch on the ways of the ancients. Indigenous people have the gift of knowing how to live with the land. This poem is beautiful and evokes the old mysteries.....lovely, Annell.

brudberg said...

Love the sound of your drums... and as for meeting in the middle I'm almost with you, but after a weekend with real nazis on the street I feel that there are some parts we should exclude before finding the middle.

ZQ said...

2 Excellent Points/poems...
"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing there is a field. I'll meet you there," Jalal-Ad-Din Rumi
ZQ

J.N.T. said...

This has a lot of culture in it. I am amazed. Wonderfully written.

Anonymous said...

The middle ground: so often right, so seldom chosen.

Wendy Bourke said...

I enjoyed both of these pieces. 'Fiestas, Carnivals, Celebrations', in particular, really transported me. I am always struck by the impact of your cascading words and images. They really serve to open up a number of perspectives.

Myrna R. said...

Enjoyed both these poems. The first I relate to because I too live in New Mexico and have observed the native dances and rituals. The second because today's political and social climate seem to divided, so loud that it's impossible to hear the other side. But, I agree that the middle ground is often the best path.

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