Thursday, February 15, 2018

Searching for The Exact (Right) Word/ Poets United. Midweek Motif/Word

Searching for The Exact (Right) Word

Words gathered/ sorted /selected
Uttered (whispered) for the first time
Then said (spoken)
At last, shouted from the roof tops

A word scrubbed in lye (lie) soap
Turned wrong-side out
Laid in the sun all day
Kneeded until tender, a perfect fit
How else to express feelings (desires)

Where do words come from
A gurgling (singing) brook
Carried on the wind
Fall from white fluffy clouds like snow flakes

Or fall into dreams from shooting stars at night
Perhaps they come from the mouths of Bedouin
Traveling in the desert by camel
Or trading in the market

Heated by the hot summer sun
In frustration words are spoken (shouted)
They come from the throat of the bull frog
Sitting on a lily pad

Calling his lady-fair across the pond
From the whispered warning of the snake
Don’t step on me (tread lightly)
Or from the dog who barks his warning

Feburary 15, 2018







6 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

The imagery in this poem is so incredibly beautiful, Annell. I am loving the format of your poems these days very much also. This one is a beauty!

Sumana Roy said...

There are so many varied and most beautiful imagery in the poem! love this.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Wow! The winner!

Maude Lynn said...

This is really gorgeous!

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M. A. S. said...

I love the whole poem, but especially the image of a word "turned the wrong way out."

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