The Making of
Memories
above taos mountain hanging in the night time sky the golden moon
a perfectly chiseled
object true to the artist's hand the sky an inky blue black
the stars
luminous the music stopped the breeze so gentle
it hardly moved the
leaves the party over people drifted away
can you say one is
superior to another when all is said and done
each one
unique people places or things
we puzzled over
each there was no winner stains were created
wine was spilled it
was no hollow celebration no one was foreign
we came together friends and neighbors memories were made
August 23, 2015
Note: Today I am not feeling too creative...but I gave it a try...and still I wasn't able to use all the words...my brain seems to be jelly?
5 comments:
Luv it. The way one verse ending so skillfully wraps onto the other
Have a good Sunday
Much love...
What a clever format - like a clover leaf, three in one.
It sounds like a wonderful gathering, and I love the mental image of the moon rising up above Taos Mountain.
This sounds like quite a gathering! Indeed, when change knocks, welcome it! I really like that philosophy.
I think I understood this...but, it was very vague.
ZQ
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