Flood
on desert roads         low spots usually have a flood gauge        and a caution sign
if the water reaches this point    do not drive in           the world seems hot and dry
water does not penetrate     the hard desert landscape          flash floods fill arroyos
like love's first bloom        the heart is full to over flowing        no flood gauges
no caution signs                 we rush right in                      throw caution to the wind
no thought of a broken heart      can you swim               keep your head above water
save yourself          maybe a distress flag                     and a life vest in your tool box
until you know                   if he is Mr. Right             ..or Mr. Wrong
August 16, 2017
7 comments:
Ah, you are right, Annell, sometimes we do rush right in....throwing caution to the wind. We just hope for the best!
I'm not sure where we would put the road sign--a tattoo maybe? From desert to flood in an instant--ah youth! I remember when love seemed that simple. It never was. Neat poem.
I love the comparison of love to floods. It is just that discombobulating. I really like this one, Annell.
"we rush right in"...Love is blind ;)
I like the comparison of floods and love - so true. Keep your head above water!
strong tide,
lovely poetry.
Different & unique style of expression!
Flood in a desert...
Need to survive.
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