Ask Not Who is in Charge
Who’s in charge?
You ask with straight-face
Ideas have words
You name them
They appear at your own will
I trust your discretion
March 15, 2018
Grace has asked us to write a Shadorma.
So here's the thing with the Shadorma: it is a phantom form
enshrouded in shadows and mystery. Poetry bloggers who introduce the form seem
to copy/paste the definition from Wikipedia's own vague entry, but fail to back
up what the Shadorma says it is. Word on the online street says that it is a
Spanish form, though the name doesn't sound Spanish (like other
"true" forms, such as the letrilla or the pareado) and I have yet to
find one example written by a Spanish poet. I'm inclined to believe that it is a
recent invention that, due to its enigmatic and alluring nature, has drawn in a
cult following.
(Source: poetry-in-form.com)
Let us dVerse
poets be allured! Shadorma is a syllabic poem consisting of six-line stanzas.
The pattern is 3-5-3-3-7-5, and you may write one stanza, twenty, or anywhere
in between. In honor of its nebulous origins, I suggest the content explore the
fog, the paranormal, the unexplained phenomena of life and death. Ultimately
though, let the Shadorma lead you in what you shall write...and reveal.
10 comments:
If you have to ask... something is probably not right to start with...
I tend to assume no one is in charge :)
I find no one ever wants to say (or be) the one in charge.
This is a strange poem (perfect!) that makes me think of the relationship between words and will, and the responsibility of each. I am intrigued by your characters in your dialogue and want to know more, but I guess I did ask for mystery...
I think this could be read in so many ways at the moment....very dark and spooky...
One needs discretion with ideas and words.
I like this... it's kept me guessing. I read it in so many ways. Well, no-one's in charge at my end...my muse is resting.
Ha, a fun and thought-provoking read, which felt as if it was written with verve.
An intriguing poem, which makes one think.......
This could be personal or speak of political times...
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