JAPANESE TEA CEREMONY
Excuse me?
Did you ask for tea?
My green turban wrap
Makes it hard
For me to see
But I remember
You asked for tea
Yes, you did
You asked for tea
You asked for tea
My coat
Green embroidered in gold
Underneath my coat
I wear black
Your tea bowl green
The water hot
So it is up to you to choose
A tea ceremony just for you
May 5, 2018
8 comments:
I'm just afraid she is going to spill it because she can't see!
Hope she orders green tea!
So it is up to you to choose
A tea ceremony just for you
Obviously a good time to be had just having tea!
Hank
I like how you added the green through the piece. I also think you did a fab job of capturing a distinct narrative voice. well done and viva la!
I like that you have also picked up on the eyes under the turban. I also like that you've given the poem some colour and a clear voice, Annell - I can hear it!
You managed to convey a certain kind of polite subservience in this poem, Annell, and yet a touch of defiance too. Well done.
Lovely take on the picture, Annell 💜
I'm not sure if she is rude or rattled, but I think I like her. :)
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