What is My Reason for Writing?
You ask about my reason for writing
And I will say
It is to know what I am thinking
It is a record of what I was thinking yesterday
I want to be able to look at an idea
And condense it to its’ essence
OK, that is what you want to say
Now ask again, Is it really what you want to say?
I want to say it clearly
Without stutter
There is an elegance to clarity
Hard edged, flat color
I want to throw caution to the wind
And see what comes back
In the form of a black bird with red wing
…Or a poem
April 17, 2019
https://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/poetic-asides/2019-april-pad-challenge-day-16
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https://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/poetic-asides/2019-april-pad-challenge-day-16
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Say it… Say It Differently
Perhaps prose is more clear
The who, what and where
Are often stated
Everything is said
For the sake of clarity
But in a poem
You may stay hidden
Never come out at all
The guests arrive
But may never see you
On the other hand
You may be front and center
It is your choice
You are the poet
Always looking for a different
Way to say it.
April 17, 2019
poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/Poets United Midweek Motif - Writing Prose
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poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/Poets United Midweek Motif - Writing Prose
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The Mind Is Its Own Beautiful Prisoner
I suppose you are right
Held against my will
Through the long night
Words in flight
A prisoner I am
I cannot take up residence
In someone else’s head
In this place I was born
And suffer a bit of obsession
Thinking the same thoughts
Over and over again
We are told we have
26 thousand thoughts a day
Unfortunately, most are the same
I know mine sure are
This will probably remain the same
Until I die
As it has been so far
Unless… someone leaves the door ajar
Then I will escape
Held against my will
Through the long night
Words in flight
A prisoner I am
I cannot take up residence
In someone else’s head
In this place I was born
And suffer a bit of obsession
Thinking the same thoughts
Over and over again
We are told we have
26 thousand thoughts a day
Unfortunately, most are the same
I know mine sure are
This will probably remain the same
Until I die
As it has been so far
Unless… someone leaves the door ajar
Then I will escape
Be free at last
Still, where ever I go
There I am
The mind is its own beautiful prisoner
Still, where ever I go
There I am
The mind is its own beautiful prisoner
April 17, 2019
http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/04/poems-in-april-somewhere-in-midst-of.html
Poems in April ~ Somewhere in the midst of stirring April
http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/04/poems-in-april-somewhere-in-midst-of.html
11 comments:
I do like the way good poems leave a lot to our imaginations, hinting at things, but never spelling them out in detail.
Both poems speak to me, and both fit my prompt. Reason for writing is a fine dialogue with the self (in my case) and the latter, oh, that mysterious creative process! You have it double with painting and poetry.
luv the telling verses the abstracting
much love...
This is incredibly poignant! We are forever prisoners at the hands of our thoughts and fears and doubts.
The repeated thoughts I know.. like a broken record.
You're very convincing – yet I think that, although it might be a prison, it is also a universe.
Yes, the repetitive thoughts are familiar. I live so much of my days in my head, especially this month.
"Always looking for a different / Way to say it." Yup, you sum it up nicely.
Yes, we poets are held against our will by words in flight, prisoners in our own heads. But if we were able to get inside someone else’s head we’d be stuck in their prison. Better the one we know…
Luckily my muse just pulls something out the bag at last minute for me to use. However I agree we are prisoners...secretly satisfied with our lot.
Exactly the way I feel about poetry and prose.
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